Falling Angels

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Aug 12, 2006


Each hour you'll see
A new Angel fall,
Each hour will bleed
And a new angel will crawl.

Dropping one by one,
These Angels cry,
Dropping as they're gone,
These Angels die.

A fierce shining light,
A new miracle this day,
A firece battle fight,
A miracle lost its way.

Pick them off the floor
As dying Angels crawl,
Pick them up as the tears pour,
As dying Angels fall.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Wow.. that is really good. And also creepy lol.. it gave me chills. The flow and rhythm of this was really good and it held up well and the imagery that you had in this was amazing. I like the whole concept, I always love poems about angels. You did a great job on this! 5/5 Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by -The-Undying-

    Dropping one by one,
    These Angels cry,
    Dropping as they're gone,
    These Angels die.
    This was an amazing poem with lots of detail. It is very enticing seeing your view on angels! I loved it!

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    This poem is very beautiful in a sad unique way, I loved it....I pictured the whole poem in my head while reading it...Great job, excellent =0)

    Much Love Sabrina

  • 18 years ago

    by Synh

    You're trying to hard to make it seem dark and depressing... besides it doesnt make much sense either. i dont know where you're coming from and what the meaning of this poem is supposed to be.

  • 18 years ago

    by Nelle

    Awww that was soo cute and sweet..and i loved it! none of the rhymes seemed forced, it was a great topic! great job 5/5

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