by SmileeItsBritt Aug 12, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
Your words are like bullets |
by Melpomene
I can really relate to this poem. I felt the emotion flowing throughout it. Emotion was so strong. Flow was great. Word choice fantastic. Well done ~mel |
by firexdancer
You have an amazing ability of being able to show you emotion in the poem perfectly, 5/5 |
by MOON
I really felt ur pain thorough ur poem, it's one of the best i read in this site, keep it going, ur so good.. |
by blueknight
Wow a different type of poem and this one reflects who you are by using that words the flow that connects evry other lines great |