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by Briana Aug 12, 2006 category : Life, society / about society
I've been whitened out by society Covered up by superficiality Condemed for being unique I've been crossed out by society Exiled as if I mean nothing As undermined as I can be I've been asked to join society Only condition is to modify me I reject their offer willingly Because with every change comes another That will immediately be undercovered As these lies unfold, leaving you smothered And nobody ends up satisfied
by Shai
Great Work! The emotions are clearly shown through your words, and I'm glad you don't repeat words over and over. Very nicely done.
by Natalie
Very nice. Good rhyming scheme. Good job!