A very nice andstrong poem, it flowed very well, nice job

Very sad and touching poem. Nice use of imagery too, (though sick)lol, Keep it up

... Speechless ... 5/5 .. It flowed smoothly, the rhyming was great.. the story.. wow.. If this happened to you... *hugs* 5/5 u deserve no less.

Ohwow... This is so amazing Jessy I loved it I'm like speechless right now though. So pardon me if my comment is lame. The rhyming was like an extra. I think the flow was good, and you gave very bold and detailed words. Nicely done.

Wow...very deep and you really described it well...very well...5/5

Oh my gosh, Jessy. I pray to god this isn't really about you.. If it is, you know I'm here if you need someone, kay?

But wow. What an emotional intense write. This was amazing, really! You've put so many discriptions into this helping the reader understand alot more. Very well done.Wow. Keep it up hun. 5/5

Natalie``

Awww this is so sad.... It brought back horrible memories for I know someone who is going through that... God. Nicely written though with losts of emotion.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Wow. This has so much emotion. I REALLY hope this isn't true of any means. No one should have to go through that. Ever. The flow was good, and the rhymes were done very well. I liked the vocab you used throughout the whole poem. Great write. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

That is a sick sick poem, but well written! I think maybe the rhyme is slightly forced in the first three stanzas, but as the poem goes on it gets better. Great twist at the end...totally didn't expect that.

Aww that was a very sad poem, full of emotions, but very well written.. well done 5/5 xx

OMG!! That was soo sad...I can definitely relate to this, just in a different kind of way!! Your words were amazing, this was tragiclly written..but it was also beautiful, sad, and very touching..i absolutely loved it! GREAT GREAT job! 5/5

It is painfull.

I LOVED THIS POEM..IT HAPPEND TO ME A COUPLE TIMES

THIS IS FANTASTIC, GAVE YOU A 5 GIRL. MAKES ME FEEL A BIT SICK REALLY THO, BUT ITS STILL GOOD. MAKES YOU THINK

WELL DONE.

Omg that is such a good poem i relli do hope its not tru....

WOW...is all i can say...5/5

Jessy, that poem wa sso touching, i hope it didnt happen to u if it did i totally understand, i just want to say i absolutly love it..... cya

Truely a riviting piece of work you have penned her. Wheather fiction or not you bring the reader to a dismal scene, one of dismay and andeniable horror. And most of all you bring to the sheet a real truth of what happens to so many of the youth today and of the past and the scars that such an act must leave on the tatters of ones innocense. I am most impressed with the way you have prtrayed such a rgretable emotion in which no young person should ever deserve to feel. thank you for this incredible pice of work!!!

Very well written. Tragic though. It stung my heart to read it.

That was really sad but great poem tho ; )