Sky

by noha   Aug 12, 2006


When you Look at sunset,asking why?
why the sun every day have to cry.
for leaving earth,alone in her sky.
even if sun promise to back again next day.
the earth still cry for saying good bye.
do you know how many sec?
how many minutes will pass without you?
even if i know that i will see you again
but it cant prevent my tears to fall.
i cant prevent my heart to beat for you.
i just cant stop thinking that you will leave,
its hard for me to believe.
you always promise me that tomorrow i will see you,
this is what sun always promise earth to do.
i love you and i will always wait to see you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nelle

    I did not understand any of this. I'm sorry but half of the words are not spelled right, and the flow was off. i think that if you want more people to comment you should fix it up a little bit.

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Thz alot

  • 16 years ago

    by StonedGooberz

    Hmm the title told me i had to read this poem and i have no idea if this was one of your first poems written or not but it was good. i think the only part of it i disliked is when you abreviated some of the words. but the metaphor comparing you to the earth and him to the sun was great i loved that - raindrops 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    Short and sweet... Really nice poem... keep up this good work :)

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Thz u dont know how much this help me to write more and be better

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