I think that poem was good.
it shoud how you felt.

-Abbey

Very good poem - i love the plea and emotion, i wish u luck wit ur situation - Sophie

Love the poem, your feelings are represented well, good look with it-Kris

I think that's really good! I know what you mean about wanting someone to stop drinking sooo badly but they won't even try...Nice Job!

Good job, it sounds like it came from the heart, 5/5, good luck wit it

OMG! i love your poem, i can relate to it big time!
And then they say oh i will go to rehab, Yeah sure they went for one day and then walked off and got something to drink!
Keep up the great work! I love your Work!

Hey, i really liked this poem... it was really deep but good... i really like your work
Talk soon
**Em**

Yeah i agree with the comments ere, sounds like you really meant it, really good!!

Hey, thats good. its got really good meaning. I can almost relate to that. actually, i can. It would be great if you would comment some of my poems. thanks. Emily xo

Aww this is sad...it reminds me of well me but i was the one being told to stop.....well i hope things get better

xoxo
Lizzy

Hey i like how u write whats on ur heart and i hope it all works out in the end! hey if u could comment on my poem "down on my knee's that would be great!! thanx!

Yeah it does, sorry i am juts replying to your comment you left... OMG i can't get over how good your peom is!!!!!!

Wow! Really Nice poem! Keep it up gurl!
-sarah..

Awwwww yea I think those are the exact reasons I don't liek excesive drinking