by Choose xX Alex Xx Life Aug 12, 2006
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Dear lord...... |
I liked it, it was very powerful and nice, 5/5 |
One thing is for sure, you put a lot of mind and heart in your poems which is great. it sets you apart. |
Evil race????.... And....'made in His image'......Honey...you really had me heading for an Amen! up until that last line......The forces of evil are not equivalent to the divine force in every human being.....I beg you to reconsider this particular line of thinking.......What is going here on is a Monumental Struggle for the Souls of Beings of Free Will.....so....we have to choose....and then....strive mightily, for the rest of our lives, to meet the requirements of that choice....Your poem inspired this full blown response...that says something, too...... |
by Jenni Marie
WOW!! |
by joern
Real nice prayer. Great work, nice to read. But maybe its not gods task to make things good. Its those of the you and the mes |