Another great poem.
It is written greatly and you are a wonderful poet, keep up your great job
5/5

Good job, I like the flow of the poem much better than the other one I think. good work and keep writing

Julie

A line I found interesting was "and makes me want to end these wars"...I was jw wondering what that was an allusion to; I really liked the poem though, the flow of rhyming was good

Aww this piece is very sweet. 5/5 for sure. :-)

I love the flow of your words and the poem is sad yet sweet at the same time. i really enjoyed reading it. definately a 5/5

This was very beautiful. i loved it. keep writing and God bless

This is awsome i love it

Excellent poem. =) great flow. this stanza really stood out:

"Alas, I know we will not come to be,
As I have recently come to see,
Because there really is no you.
You came from out of the blue."

my favourite. no idea why. lol =D
keep writing, u have such talent,
xxx

...and flowed out beautifully! :D

I like how you started this one.
And over all the feel of the poem is good.
Good work!

God Bless!

That was really good, it was short but the length means nothing to me, the words and emotion are stronger than anything else.
i did like it, so well done
xxxxx

Very Good 5/5

Aww.. I love this poem. I can somewhat relate to it. Except the guy from my dreams is real, just not mine anymore. But I loved this poem. You did such a great job on this! Keep it up! 5/5

This part i loved
"I'll see your smile beam,
Only in a distant dream."

keep it up!

Very well written and beautifully penned I love it yeah this is shorter but really great I love how you used words and rhyme it great job

XD
Geneross

Once again i already dsid this poem 4 u a long time ago