All smiles,all tears

by tanya   Aug 12, 2006


In a room here,
full of false panes,
i'm swallowed into a dream,
but i fight,
and i lose.

I watch you,
you watch me,
and i'm solemn -
please don't say a word,
i cannot see your face,anymore.

In a quiet place,
a dark place,
shred into tiny pieces,
and the seams crumble in your hands.

We're all smiles,
all tears,
breaking was so easy before,
it's a challenge,
now i'm breaking glass in vain.

Just one break,too late,
the pain cuts deeper than ever before -
and i bleed,
with the tears that came from the rain.

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  • 18 years ago

    by tanya

    Hey suzie!!,yeah,definately long time no..hear lol.I'm glad you liked it,i thought it would make no sense to anyone,but it did,so yay!.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Hey Tanya!!!! suzie here. long time no.. hear..from lol : D
    this was sooo good.i love it completely. it was so sad and touching and emotionally pulled me in. incredible. love ur stuff. keep writing!
    -Suz

  • 18 years ago

    by tanya

    Hey thanks! x3

    i'll check out some of your stuff too =]

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ.Total.Mess.ღ™

    I loved it. Your a good writer. Keep up the good work. I'll shut up now and give you 5/5 :]
    Love,
    Rayne x3

    Peace

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