by Ike Dizzle Aug 12, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
She is someone who always there |
It was okay, nice. I think there were a few mistakes made in the piece though. |
by Shelly
I really like that poem and wen i was reading it i could relate it too a frined i used to have and yea its got a great flow. |
by Jessica
This was good.. the emotion you feel is loud and clear.. the flow and rhymes are a bit awkward though.. nice job! 4/5 |
Awesome poem. Very well written and full of emotion. Great job!! Anyways, I'll shut up now and give you 5/5 =] |
Ur spelling and words are off, so it makes it hard to read. but its a great poem besides that...its hard to tell who u r talking to...u say "you" and "her" so i cant really tell...good job tho and i feel special to be on uir favorites. yay me! |