by Megann Lee Aug 12, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Pale fingers tremble upon the Grey stone. |
Megan-- This was WOW. Great vocab used in this piece. I loved it. Your flow was pretty good too, Though if you wanted you could take a word or two out of each line, and it might help it look more stuctured. But that doesn't really matter. It was still a great poem. Nicely written! Keep it up! 5/5 |
My heart turning black without your hand to hold it close |
WOW, WE DID GOOD! w00p, w00p! |