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by kayla Aug 12, 2006 category : Sadness, depression / other
Her mind goes dark, and the world is blank. She thinks, she wonders, she blames. She wont let it build up inside her, her lies taking over, her mind becoming darker, the hate becoming stronger. Her world becoming black, her life becoming meaningless, her eyes beginning to close, the darkness has taken over. She opens her eyes, and sees the light, her mind is starting to clear, she is not in the dark. The world, colourful her mind bright the hate gone the lies vanished. It didn't build up inside.
by Phantasmagoria
It's good, but the ending just doesn't match up with the poem.