A letter to thee

by rhiannon   Aug 12, 2006


I understand people ask for your strength but dear god i need guidance help me fix my mistake.
i worry about all the things people say and because of this my baby is dead today.
i think how everyday day would be if my baby boy was here with me i was so young god but i know thats not an excuse i should of asked u What i should do.
but instead i took everyone Else's word when they said i would lose my man if i told him about a new future we would have to plan.
now I'm alone god and i put my fate in your hands to controll but if you cant forgive me god i will understand i made the biggest mistake and shouldnt be able to let the memories go.

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  • 17 years ago

    by STEPHANiiE

    THIS POEM IS DEEP.............I LOVE IT

  • 18 years ago

    by Yulie

    Hmm.
    Its sad.
    But you got the message out pretty well

  • 18 years ago

    by A Fallen Angel

    I liked how you conveyed your sad emotion into this and the style is different from everything i have ever read and it is beautiful. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Format, yet again, was horrible for a poem. But the feelings and emotion are amazing. =) Good job. 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 18 years ago

    by G A Darkened

    Damn good, damn good, it was true beautiy... thank u.. i realy injoyed reading it...

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