by The Tay
Wow....this one is very deep...i like it causei can relate...amazing job writing hun....keep it up! 5/5 =) |
And again another poem of you that touched my heart.. I've just (again)read your poems, and I can't say anything other than that they are great.. so please keep on writing |
This poem hit home for me. Reading this at work was a bad idea, becuase now, i'm thinking of him again. and yet...i smile because this poem is so amazing. i love ur work its great. wonderful poem, 5/5 keep writing! |
by Ney ney
Wow... really well written... really down to the point... please check out some of mine and comment |
by Natalie
Awe! I hope this isn't based on any true feelings. :[ ..Very nicely done though. The emotions were really powerful. Although I thought the rhyming was pretty simple, you still did a great job at grabbing the readers attention with all the hurt and emotions. Great job! Keep it up! 5/5 |
by Kayla
Wow...love it...i can relate on so many levels..keep writing!! |
by Aussie
Very good poem. it mad me think. |
by jessel jane
Wonderful... simply wonderful! |
by Colourful Mind
Deep and well wrote i can really relate to that poem x x x x x x |
by vanessa
This is a very great poem i totally feel the same some days |