I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!
its sensual.
idk if thats the right word lol
i think thats it.
but i loved this!
its def. perfect.

It's very good! I enjoyed it a lot. Your details and imagery are fantastic. My only tip is to relax the rhyming a bit. Rhyme is not required, and this poem might be better if it was free verse. Take my advice with a grain of salt, but I liked it a lot! Good job!

Great poem, really liked it
-steven

I absolutely love your poem! its good, hey im not sure if i know you from someone but u sound familiar, i may be wrong tho, uhm... do u know a guy name iman, if you do email me or something, k, im not trying to creep you out or anything, i was jw

Your a feisty one, aren't you? Ha ha, I liked it. It's really great. 5/5