Now your gone, but i'm still here

by {Pete}   Aug 12, 2006


When you miss her but she doesn't care,
When she's moved on but your stuck there,
First thing in the morning and the last thing at night,
All you want is a way to make it right.

One chance and its gone, one choice and its wrong,
If only you could turn back time,
It was so good, if only I could,
Take it back, perhaps you would be mine.

Your heart sings her name, never will be the same,
The only one you want has just gone,
She cant be replaced, but still I am faced,
With a torn heart to struggle on.

Maybe I'll find, if I give it some time,
That the wounds shall all heal one day,
But for now its still sore, for I'm wanting more,
But I shall not get it today.

Perhaps it is best, if its all left to rest,
Still how can we be so sure,
I know I'm ill, for I love her still,
But for that there is only one cure.

In dreams she'll return, but for now I must learn,
To live with my life so blue,
I'm sure that one day, I will look back and say
My heart's still belonging to you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Chasie

    Omg i loved it great job love it

  • 18 years ago

    by Synh

    The first to lines need re-structuring. You make it sound as though you're going to give an explanation after them but you never did.
    The first line in the second stanza was kinda odd... you all of a sudden pulled out a different ryhme scheme. It makes the first stanza appear to be mismatched with the rest of your poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awww, that was really sweet! The descriptions you used described it well, the emotion is loud and clear, the only problem was the flow.. It was just a little bit off, some lines were longer than others and this made it hard to read.. Keep up the good work! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by {Pete}

    I have sorted that apostrophe thing, sorry about that.
    Glad you like it though, thanks for your comments
    Pete

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ.Total.Mess.ღ™

    Wow, I loved it!! Full of emotion and I can totally relate to it. Very well written. And I hope you feel better and you can do so much better and I know people tell you that all the time (trust me, I know) But it's true. Anways I'll shut up now and give you 5/5 =]
    Love,
    Rayne x3

    Peace

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