Pretty good, but instead of an apostrophe in your poem, it was "â". I hate it when that happens. Just thought I'd let you know. ;) Very good poem, though! Keep writing and "welcome to poems and quotes website!" ;)

~~Spanish367

Man that is so tuching u really shouldn't take that bull shit. From some gurl like that. u dezirve a hole lot better than that believe me on this. I love this boy that treats me just the same and it makes me feel like shit. and i use 2 believe every single word he said about me well i loved this poem so i think i will give u a 20/20 keep up the good work !!!!!!!!!

sign, Rosie

Wow, I loved it!! Full of emotion and I can totally relate to it. Very well written. And I hope you feel better and you can do so much better and I know people tell you that all the time (trust me, I know) But it's true. Anways I'll shut up now and give you 5/5 =]
Love,
Rayne x3

Peace

I have sorted that apostrophe thing, sorry about that.
Glad you like it though, thanks for your comments
Pete

Awww, that was really sweet! The descriptions you used described it well, the emotion is loud and clear, the only problem was the flow.. It was just a little bit off, some lines were longer than others and this made it hard to read.. Keep up the good work! 5/5

The first to lines need re-structuring. You make it sound as though you're going to give an explanation after them but you never did.
The first line in the second stanza was kinda odd... you all of a sudden pulled out a different ryhme scheme. It makes the first stanza appear to be mismatched with the rest of your poem.

Omg i loved it great job love it