Awwwwwww me loves it hoho. hmm it seems like ur writing alot about brit lately...just noticing. ill ttyl.
~me, the one and only Rachel Renee~

Oo I like this one, really. Its kind of sad too. It really makes me feel kind of how you feel. I can tell its a true story.

To be honest I don't how to rate this poem lower than a 5. Great Job

It's a very honest and touching type of poem. It has a few bumpy spots, where the flow seems a little off, but besides that it's very good. It sounds natural and you're word choise is great...

I hate commenting on poetry, but I figured you deserved one.

~Purple~