Aww, that's so sad. I love it. Very well written. You have talent. 5/5 =]
Love,
Rayne x3

Peace

This is great i felt goosebumps when u stated that ge was dead then i was like pleading with myself that he wasnt lol i know how sad i pleaded with myself but that is how powerfull i found this poem good job

keenan

This is really good. it brought tears to my eyes. i give it 5/5