Good rhyming pattern. nice flow. very good. beatiful.
love .+. unpretty_loser .+. xo

I loved this poem, great wording, great rhyming, great poem 5/5 xx

Omg wow.. that is soo sad.. but i really like it. i kno how u feel. i can relate to most of ur poems. u have so much talent. u wrote this so beautifully if that makes ne sense at all. but i really love this. if u ever wana talk jus email me
take care
luve angie

Yeh i love it!
I relate to ur poems so much!
Very talented
Take care much love xxxxxx

Nice poem I can really relate to it, thxs for making whats left of my day :)

Tony :D