Loving you ))*(( loosing you

by Briana   Aug 13, 2006


When it came down to you and me,
my heart told me to love you..
but my mind told me to just leave.

loving you, then loosing you, you left me there cold and blue.
My mind is empty and my heart is beat, for another girl you left me sad, down and hurt very deep!

Loving you, then loosing you;
seems like suicide to me, cause now when I'm thinking of you.. i think of what we could be.

Hurting and crying hoping the pain will go away,
but the hurting is still killing me and the pain is here to stay.

Knives are stabbing me in the heart as you are with her everyday,
watching you be so in love with her
hurts me in every way.

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  • 17 years ago

    by xXAxTwistedxWishXx

    Wow im going tho this rite now...n yeahh guys are jerks

  • 17 years ago

    by bethany

    THIS IS A CUTE POEM AND I CAN RELATE
    WOW YOU ARE ONLY 14 AND YOU WRITE LIKE A PROFESSIONAL

  • 17 years ago

    by ~onelove4life~

    I had the same problem with my ex but u will get over him soon br strong and hold ur head up high

  • 18 years ago

    by NothingGoldCanStay

    Wow. Sad. Lovely poem.

    Knives are stabbing me in the heart as you are with her everyday,
    watching you be so in love with her
    hurts me in every way.

    The ending was so good. Excellent :]

    N-G-C-S.

  • Aww, its cute and deep. Very well written. Your a talented writer. 5/5
    Love,
    Rayne x3

    Peace