Fantastic poem. the imagery portrays soo much emotion in a truely artistic way.
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I think that you have a really good idea on how you can tranform what you feel/think so that other people can relate and understand. i think by far this is one of the best peoms i have everr read. good job and keep writing.

Damn! That was DEEP....Love it!! 5/5

Great poem, 5/5