Awh. That was really sweet and well written. Ha. My mother came in cause she heard me say: "Awhh!" Aloud. I didn't realize I said it. Anyway. I really liked the wording you used. Nicely done.

That was really sweet, i loved your use of vocabulary..your description and imagery was great..your rhymes didn't seem forced it flowed perfectly! great job 5/5

Very interesting poem. There were some words I didn't understand, but overall it was creative.