Very nice! I enjoyed that a lot. Good detail. Good job!

Deana, a beautiful penned you've done here. so breathtaking emotions, lovely yet so well ended.... To hope, to yearn, to love, to need, To feel the cut, yet never bleed, To know the life that you may live, To do the wrong... and then forgive. To smell, to hear, to taste, to see, To feel the joy when viewing thee, To know thy touch of gentle lips... keep writing, you've a great talent...anyway thanks for your beautiful comment, i very appreciated! have a great weekend, take care. bert.

This is a beautiful poem deanna! great job!! you definitely are very talented:)

chelsea

I like how you used a two line stanza thing. It's something I may try one day, but I usually stick to the traditional 4 line stanza. 5/5 good poem, keep up the good work.