Been there, done that... Not walked in your shoes. But have put callused ones in mine. I will tell you this, Write what you feel. If you try to write what other people like you'll end up giving lip service to things that aren't real.

If your life sucks and you use poetry to express it then more power to you.

I wish I could say something but I'm completely speechless...Literally speechless...It's a breath-taking poem. I don't care what your poems are about, or how happy or sad they are...They are amazing no matter what.

Love Always
~Casey J

I really like this one. It shows ambition and truth of who you are and that you don't care of what others think. good job.