This could use a little work hun although it is more than a 3. The middle stanza flows really well and as it is the only one to rhyme makes the whole thing a bit wonky.
The vocab is sweet if a little trite and the theme has a nice feel. I wouldn't say it is slop but it could be improved.
4/5

Awww.. that was really sweet.. ignore the votes hunny, this was great! the descriptions and emotion were beautiful.. and the flow worked well.. nice job! 5/5

I thought this was good. Although more emotion and emphasis could have been put into your words, my honest critique is that it is still a good poem, and not horrible. The middle stanza flows well, but towards the end the poem just flops. It's not slop though! Good write. 4/5

Nelle--- This was really good! Your rhymes were great in this piece, I adorded them so much! There's nothing I'd change either, I just love it! And Ily.2 5/5

Natalie``