"My scars are not upon my skin
But upon my broken heart"

There two lines are my favourite.
They're so powerful... well done x

Wow wut a powerful and very sad poem. but i kno how u feel i can totally relate.. like cutting yea i can relate to that... very very sad topic.. but yea.. ne ways this is so good.. i lvoe it. u have talent so keep on writing
if u ever need or want to talk im here.. u can email me
take care
luve angie

This is such a sad poem. its short, yet it has so much meaning to it. you can really write! i think you will go far in life, just never stop writting! You can email me or comment on my poems any time =) Id appreciate it soooo much.. i love your stuff =) -- Meg

Well done!!!