Good work! i like this

Really nicely written. It had a really good meaning to it and was very understandable. I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work. Check out some of mine if you wish.
God Bless
*Tay*
SouthernPride!

'Deserve it I don't, but need it I do,
Lonely am I, if I cant have you. '

AHHHHH! I LOVE that line!!! Beautiful. 5/5