Can you see it in my eyes?

by Elisa   Aug 13, 2006


You don't know how I'm feeling.
I have yet to vocalize
Desire deep inside me.
Can you see it in my eyes?

I tremble when I'm near you
Heat travels up my thighs
and I want you with an urgency
That I just can't describe.

Dare I reach out to touch you?
Do you think you'd realize
How much I want and need you?
Can you see it in my eyes?

I long to say, "I love you,"
But am scared of your reply.
Terrified like a child
I've become paralyzed.

The camouflaged emotions
Lead to pain and silent cries.
And yet I just can't tell you.
Don't you see it in my eyes?

Confessing through this poem
My dilemma summarized.
The feeling's quite cathartic,
But will lead to my demise.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Briana

    It was quite an enjoyable read to say the least. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I really love this poem especially the final stanza ended it nicely and showed the true meaning excellent poem hun 5/5 thanks for to comments to keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by adam

    Hey hun, glad ur ok babes i was a little worried about you, time is a great healer and it makes me smile to think that ur not hurting anymore. u deserve so much more than he could give u. and i hope one day u find it. im always hear if u wana talk xxxxxxxxx my email is ajm_1980@yahoo.co.uk take care hun :-)

  • 18 years ago

    by WitherBlisterBurnandPeel

    This is a really good poem, one of your best ones
    and thanx for the comment
    but all i can say to answer your question is that im over it now and that poem helped release everything
    but great poem
    keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    Hi Elisa how r you? can you do me a big favour please? i need some voters so will you plz rate all my poems? thanxa bunch!

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