It's so good to see a hopeful, calm, happy poem on here. this is really nice

I'm loving the inspirational aspects of this. The poem is beautifully penned as well.
However, there are far too many she's and her's in it. Once you establish whom the poem is about it's not necessary to keep referring back to them in pronoun form.
Wow, that sounded kinda smart huh? lol.
Anyway, just a suggestion....love ya~Holly

Absolutely beautiful!! I loved the poem and it was very well written. Thank you ~ I needed that poem today!