by Catastrophic Beauty Aug 13, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Remembering back to the days when he was your only one, |
by Laurie Tran
This was a beautiful poem. I liked how you started it bright and cheery and slowly faded it to gray. However, the last two stanzas seemed to have broke from the flow . Great job though!!! Keep it up :) |
by Laurie Tran
This was a beautiful poem. I liked how you started it bright and cheery and slowly faded it to gray. However, the last two stanzas seemed to have broke from the flow . Great job though!!! Keep it up :) |
by makayla
This is good. |
This goes along with my poem 'One Last Moment'.. I had the same feeling when I wrote it. |
by Broken Angel
Awww thats one of the nicest poems ive ever read!!! excellent job!!! keep it up!! definetly 5/5 |