You write beyond your years
great stuff
love kat - xox

U hav the most beuatiful words. i cant believe u can write like this at such a young age. u are truley amazing. wow, and thx for ur comments,
love ya lots,
sore

This is an amazing poem. I really loved this one alot. You have some talent. I just fallen in love with this poem alot. Even though i can kinda relate to it but not really because my past relationship i guess he "loved" me but when i was always around he wanted to break up with me so yeah. but anyways amazing job once again.

keep up the good work. keep on writing. love always and forever.

also thank you for reading my poem and telling me what you think, means alot to me.

THiS WAS AMAZiNG! iT`S SO TRUE! i LOVE iT! CHECK MiNE OUT iF YOU WANT!

x3------SHELBY

This is awsome I used to relate but damn gurl you should write a book. I want to but I am not as good as you
! Keep up the great job!!!!!Ur in my favorites!

Your poems hold so much emotion... I could really relate to this one... 5/5

WOWZERS!!!! that was ABSOLUTELY wonderful and i LOVE it ALL the way...i could REALLY relate to it and the flow of it was great...keep up the good work chica!!! u got talent:):):):)

always
*~*xxBaBi_GrrLxx*~*

OMG!! i loved it! at some points it was like you were living my life! really great!

Wow! what talent you have and you say you're only 13!?! I really loved how you write! you sound sooo mature! lol
thanks for the comment!!
MandiexOx

This poem is wonderful in my opinion.....My favortie lines were: Priceless moments that you had now cost a bundle of tears,
All your sweet dreams have turned into horrid nightmares.
You write poetry so well so stick with it

Now that is what i call the best BLOODY poem i have ever read! your soo talented! i luuved it! so many emotions running through it! SPLENDID!
keep up the GREAT work!!
take care..
luv,,
haya 3gab =]

They r right... u do right beyond your age!!! great vocabulary and such emotion!! ur on my faves!!!

This poem is excellent!! i can really relate to this! you have an amazing writing style!!

Hey cool poem
nice to see that people are still working toward good poetry
if u dont mind, could u please rate and comment my new poem THE LITTLE THINGS YOU DO
ill be sure to return the favor once u comment and rate
thanksss :)

I feel this this poem is so true and i've been there alot lately my ex was my best friend now im lost i like your style keep it up

Om effing gosh that is soo great i love it!!!!!!

jessie

U do deserve no less than a 5/5 on this one....its amazing to see such a young poet with such a wide intellectual vocabulary...
ur amongst the few on my favourites...
astonishing

Amazing.
Not only did it flow so smoothly,
it rhymed and and everything fit great.
You're beyond talented.
You definitely deserve a 5/5.
Stay cool.
Meggx33
:D

Good form, non repetative rhyme, very good meter plus its a wonderful poem

Awww thats one of the nicest poems ive ever read!!! excellent job!!! keep it up!! definetly 5/5

*Angel*