Comments : I've Fallen

  • 18 years ago

    by *screenplayofdesire*

    Wow this poem flows really well
    its quite amazin
    i know how u must have felt writin this, i am still fallin aswel, hopin hes there atthe bottom
    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    "Catching me is what I hope you do.
    I'm not asking for much I'm just asking for you."

    This is a great couplet! It rhymes very good and it has meaning! I love it!