This is great i love it and i would like to thank u for ur comment on my poem i am glad u thought it was any good thx and good job

keenan

Wow!...great emotion! loved it! congratulations on the contest! Loved this poem...the flow was goog in this one! keep it up! and keep smiling :)

Much Love
*-DK

Another great poem. Although sometimes for me it gets confusing determining which one is he, and she. It still works though, because I can't see any other way of explaining it. I'm also just very bad at following things. Great job.

Deeply metaphorical... it really made me think. it flowed really nicely too. great job!

and thank you for the comments! i fixed the misspelled word.