A great third person poem, if I do say so myself.

Very good poem it is so wonderful keep up the good work

I loved this poem and you are a great poet. When I read it I could really relate to what you were trying to say through this poem. =) its sad, but I love the sad stuff. Comment on mine sometime, ive got lots to read= ) Id appreciate it!--Meg

This was really good--all of your poems sound really good to me! I can really relate to this one. Nice! -Trinity

Ahhh, sad poem, its awesoem tho...i think everyone feels like taht atleast once...