Me and you [Minute Poetry]

by Nelle   Aug 13, 2006


I love you for you, and just you
Come help me through
Hold my hand tight
Cuddle at night

Tell me, I am who you treasure
Bring me pleasure
Take all my pain
Please, keep me sane

Together always forever
Apart, never
Kiss me til then
Keep me within

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The Minute Poem is rhyming verse form consisting of 12 lines of 60 syllables written in strict
iambic meter. The poem is formatted into 3 stanzas of 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4 syllables.
The rhyme scheme is as follows: aabb, ccdd, eeff
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(I have never done a poem like this before I have only done regular poetry, except for acrostic..so HONEST opinions would be great)

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  • 18 years ago

    by -The-Undying-

    Most of my poems are like this but more detailed... it wasn't all that interesting yet well written!

  • 18 years ago

    by Tine

    I really liked this type of poem, first time I ever read one alike this! :) I like it!
    5/5!!

    x

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Aww-- This was beautifuuuuul!! I'm so proud that you gave this type of style a go. To me, it seems like it's be really hard to do. But you've done a great job at it! Excellent hun. Keep it up! Ily. 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awwww.. that was beautiful! i loved it.. the style seems fun to do too.. might try it one day.. the descriptions were cute and created wonderful imagery.. the flow worked well too.. nice job! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by WordsHurt

    Hey!
    This poem was pretty good for a first time and its nice to see that you're trying out something else...The rhyme was very good...i dont have much words to say how good this is...5/5

    Take Care
    And
    Keep Smiling

    Much Love
    A.Pathetic.Mistake

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