Moments

by Wolf   Aug 13, 2006


I hear the sound of the winds startling the loose shut door
Swift tree leaves as they tickle the window
The moonlight quietly lands on the rug beside my chair

And in the Bed,her silky body lies
embracing the white sheets
her shy bare chest hides behind slightly dark hair

she quietly moans with such a sweet voice
as she hears the clash of the thunder
her hands reaches to the edges of the bed
trying to hold on to something
her heart races, her warm breathes loudens
and suddenly...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Great job the last line keeps people hanging and wanting more =D

    Awsum work i'l check out the rest of you stuff XD

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    I dont like the last line at all.. i felt you really left me wanting to know more, as if the poem was not yet over.. the descriptions were good though.. the flow didnt quite work but you can fix that.. all in all, i'll give you a 4/5