by Wolf Aug 13, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
I hear the sound of the winds startling the loose shut door |
by Nobodys Hero
Great job the last line keeps people hanging and wanting more =D |
by Jessica
I dont like the last line at all.. i felt you really left me wanting to know more, as if the poem was not yet over.. the descriptions were good though.. the flow didnt quite work but you can fix that.. all in all, i'll give you a 4/5 |