Comments : Moments

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    I dont like the last line at all.. i felt you really left me wanting to know more, as if the poem was not yet over.. the descriptions were good though.. the flow didnt quite work but you can fix that.. all in all, i'll give you a 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Great job the last line keeps people hanging and wanting more =D

    Awsum work i'l check out the rest of you stuff XD