It was really really good |
by Robie Lincer
Wow loved it! it ad soo much emotion in it, when i was reading it i went with the poem to another place, you go the talent great work |
Great poem. |
by katie
This poem is pretty good, i think you should make it a tad bit shorter, and tie it together a little more to make it run more smoothly,overall it's good thou. keep up the good work! |