Wow, that was awesome.. The flow was great, the descriptions were beautiful, and the emotion good..Just one thing, in the title there are site errors. Nicely done! 5/5

Hey great poem!
your are a really talented writer!
keep up the great work
love mel

I loved your poem so much!! You were able to describe in general how life is like, great job!!

This is an oustanding poem.. very original yet brings to my mind the time I tried to read Jhon milton's paradise lost

Your poem was easier to read, yet I feel no less prfound 5>>>>

Nice poemmm...5-5...love ur work

Wow a very great poem that i really enjoyed reading.outstanding job
specially the fellow was perfect
5/5

Sweet poem. lol thats all i could think of :S