Daddys Broken Little Girl

by -Ѕнэ đιεđ ѕсѓεάміηĝ-   Aug 14, 2006


Dad you lied to me again
but what the hell is new
dad you never ever cared for me
it always been about you

its always about what you want
never think of anyone else
love has never mattered to you
only material things and wealth

life for me is empty
no-one to love or care
but Ive got all the material things
but love or affection is not there

why cant you not realize
that your gifts don't mean shit to me
i just want you to get to know me
see they way your daughter has grown up to be

the only words you ever speak
are always about you
do you know how the hell that makes me feel
know you don't give a damn about what i do

it no surprise that you haven't noticed
all the cuts across my wrist
you would never notice
if in the end i did no longer exist

you say that you care for me
but thats usually over the phone
you never talk to me face to face
cause your never ever home

so daddy when you find me dead
with blood pouring from my wrists
I'm telling you know, its your fault
cause i was always last on your stupid list

please vote and comment i promise to return the favor, please tell me what you honestly think so i can improve,
love Mel

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  • 16 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    I got probs with my dad too.. he lives in darwin, i like in qld... but yer i sorta can relate... my parents arent bad people, just bad parents... try n think of it like that? im sure hes not trying to hurt you intentionally... unless hes like sadistic.. then he should be locked up...

  • 18 years ago

    by Shaylee Rose

    LOVED IT!!!!!!!!

    I can really relate to wat this poem means
    5/5
    keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    It always been about you

    [ Maybe add the the 'has' after 'it' ..or just say "it's" ]

    never think of anyone else

    [ Thinking might work better. ]

    cause your never ever home

    [ You're not your. ]

    This was a really sad poem, and I hope it's not based on anything true. The emotions in this were raw and I loved it. A great job! Keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by Spitfire

    I really like this
    i can relate about the whole father thing
    5/5
    great job again

  • 18 years ago

    by x325xRunawayTrainx103x

    This is a dark poem, but very well written. sorry to hear about the relationship with you father, but you'll win in the end.

    keep on rocking!

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