Daddy Oh Daddy

by ღ.Total.Mess.ღ™   Aug 14, 2006


Daddy oh daddy,
Your finally home,
I missed you so much,
But you just ignored me like always,
I kept on saying hi daddy, hi!
But all you did was push me away,
So I tried and tried even harder to get your attention,
But some how, daddy, it never worked,
So I got that rope, daddy, from your precious garage,
Hung myself daddy, up in my room,
For that was the moment that you finally noticed me...
I wrote that prettyful note daddy,
And all that note said was;
I've finally got your attention!
So here I am daddy,
Up in what we call heaven,
All happy inside,
Just because,

You finally noticed me...and you cared...

*Really bad poem but meh... I tried lol .. guess you never knew how bad someone could write a poem, now did ya? lol
ღ.Rαynє.ღ

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  • 18 years ago

    by kia

    It wasnt that bad at all. It made your point clear. And had good imagery. Would love you to vote or comment on any of mine.

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