by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex Aug 14, 2006
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Such a beautiful sight during the twilight, |
Paints a beautiful image in my head. The words flow so well that I didn't notice anything but the picture they drew. Wonderful write! |
by Megann Lee
Absolutely amazing. I love this poem, the detail, imagery, imagintion I get when I read it. It was so easy to read and really understand. |
by Amanda
Yes, very descriptive piece which i totally enjoyed reading. It's different and that is what I love about poems. Thanks for commenting my work and your comments are appreciated but my style of writing is just based on true facts about my life. I don't care if they're not perfect as it's just my way of getting feelings out. I'll try edit some when I have a little time. Thanks again :) |
by Shelby
I can see what u are talking about when i read this poem great visualizations |
Great use of vocabulary. very relatable |