A wonderful poem of beauty, the picture painted with these words is a perfect site, that captures feelings and warms you up inside. Chris

OhhhWow!! I love this one Deary. The wording was really nice, along with the flow. Ha, and I actually understood what you where talking about. Lovely Write yet again. :]

Have you ever seen stars captrued in the sea?
[[Think you meant "captured"]]

The stas breathe in the smell of the ocean,
[[Think you meant "stars"]]

Very nice Ottava Rima though. Loved your choice of wording for this. It was great! Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Wow.. this was so beautiful.. when i read the title i thought it would be a dark or sad poem and i was pleasantly surprised when this came up.. the imagery was stunning and the flow worked well.. wonderful job! 5/5

I am not pointing out the typos to embarrass but to shame any one who would downvote this awsome poem

please edit
Have you ever seen stars captrued in the sea?
Have you ever seen stars captured in the sea?

The stars breathe in the smell of the ocean

this poem deserves to be top rated

Great description. The poem really came to life

Nice use of words and imagery. The flow is choppy in some areas. Keep it up

Ooo! I liked it a LOT how you made things that aren't able to move or aren't living do human things. I liked the flow in it, and the rhymes were chosen out well. Great write. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

First off I already let you know what I thought of this poem in the contest thread but I wanted to let you know aain how good I thought it was.

Wow, you use such great phrases in here: "they enslave the sea," 'stars captured in the sea," "pulsing glowing stories across the ocean..." and that's only three! it makes me think that you could have something better for the first and third lines. but i'm only being picky because i believe, judging from the whole poem, that you have the talent to make it even better. great job!

Absolutely excellent poem, I havent read one this good in quite awhile.. "stars captured in the sea", Amazing use of words!! Fabulous job.. 5/5

~!*Meaghen~!*
~!*FallenTears~!*

I'm not very good at trying different styles other than the ones I am use to. I've only onced tried something different, and it was an Acrostic. I really like how other people write in other styles, but it's just not for me. You really did a good job on this one. Well detailed and very vivid imagery. I liked the title as well.

*amazed expression* wow...... this poem is one of those poems that just leaves you speechless. i love it! it flows so well, everything fits perfectly. its just great! Once again u have a true talent!
-bri

Very descriptive in this.. and also you had some great word choice. I could picture it all in my mind. The last two lines were my favorite, they just had a nice flow to them and seemed to appeal to me the most with the way that you worded them. But I loved the whole poem. It is very well written. Great job on this! 5/5

Rather boring but yet another extrodinary poem. I lived on a boat for seven years so I kno all about the sea :P. And yes I have seen the stars captured by the sea.. its amazing!

I really did love this one, I don't know what it was that captured me.
It was beautifully written for one.
I love nature poems so maybe thats why i got into it so easily.
a lovely poem, well done
xxxx

Great use of vocabulary. very relatable
~sarah~

I can see what u are talking about when i read this poem great visualizations

Yes, very descriptive piece which i totally enjoyed reading. It's different and that is what I love about poems. Thanks for commenting my work and your comments are appreciated but my style of writing is just based on true facts about my life. I don't care if they're not perfect as it's just my way of getting feelings out. I'll try edit some when I have a little time. Thanks again :)

Absolutely amazing. I love this poem, the detail, imagery, imagintion I get when I read it. It was so easy to read and really understand.