Great imagery really deep and meaningful. you have great wording. Love you to vote or comment on any of mine.

Very beautiful dom. so emotional. u have talent.
love willow xxoo

Aww i lvoe it. its so good

take care
luve angie

Words written across the darkness
Bold against the tanned starkness
I make words twist into a tribute of life
An undecided problem that I solve with a knife

A great stanza...it had so much meaning, depth, and emotion put into it. That's my favorite out of the entire poem, without a doubt. It's hard to pick out just one meaning in this, because through the entire thing, I read several.

Just in the end, it was an excellent poem, and one of my favorites of yours. Keep it up