I agree with this poem!! I do suggest you take this out of paragraph form though..it tends to turn readers off...I admire you for speaking out about your faith and Jesus...don't stop doing that!!
I'd appreciate if you read "Resting on her Neck"
Good Job
-Krissey

This is a really beautiful piece and is so full of truth. i agree with Krissey about the form though- but apart from that this is awesome stuff! ;-)