I Miss You AJ

by Wasted Fake Smiles   Aug 14, 2006


Heart burning, tears pouring out fast,
The darkness around is controlling, vast.
Emptiness inside, no point to survive,
I've lost the only thing keeping me alive.

The darkness is here because you're gone,
Although I know you'll be back before long.
Sitting here thinking of how we once were
Yet our lives have been messed up, stirred.

I miss you, aching to see your lips again,
Hearing you say my name as a friend.
Feeling your touch, though it's been a while,
I'm madly in love with you; I fell for your smile.

I hope someday we can have what we once did,
But it disintegrated like being put in acid.
The emptiness was once filled up,
But now you're traveling around Europe.

I just hope we can fill the void,
I'm sorry for what I did; I know you're annoyed.
I'll hide my feelings if you talk to me again,
Because I miss you AJ. You were my friend.

~*Who Cares?*~

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  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Excellent poem. The rhyming was great and didn't seem forced,the flow was flawless. This poem is truly remarkable. I can't see my self voting this poem lower than 5/5.

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  • 18 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    Excellent poem. stunning.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    It is a good poem for me so I voted 5/5...keep up the good work..and by the way.thnx for your comments in my poems....good day!!!!!