by Wasted Fake Smiles Aug 14, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Heart burning, tears pouring out fast, |
Excellent poem. The rhyming was great and didn't seem forced,the flow was flawless. This poem is truly remarkable. I can't see my self voting this poem lower than 5/5. |
Excellent poem. stunning. |
by Yrem Crish
It is a good poem for me so I voted 5/5...keep up the good work..and by the way.thnx for your comments in my poems....good day!!!!! |