Ey darll .that was beautiful . i went thru the same thing as u .. ma mate told me bout how her best mate killed herself . and i saw how much it hurt her wen she told me that . and i jus didnt want to do that to her ay ..but yea . it was a beautiful poem . nice work

anasha . x

Wow your an awesome writer and can really out your feelings down in writing. thanks for sharing that, it was wonderful.