May I borrow your blade??

by kristen   Mar 6, 2004


May I borrow your blade please?
May I cut and fall on my knees?
Can I hold on to your hand?
The hand that you cut with on command.
I know that he doesnt want me to.
But I must because of all the things they put me through.

May I take the blade across my wrist?
While I cut I make a fist.
A fist to be sure the blood bubbles up.
Bubbles perfectly on the top.
The top of my wrist, so I can be free.
Free of the pain they put on me.
I know this is bad and he doesnt want me to.
But I must because of all the things they put me through.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Forsaken Redeemer

    I love this poem of all of your poems so far, i think you have a really unique talent, you can make it osund jus right and not sound sing-songy, my favourite bit was:-

    May I borrow your blade please?
    May I cut and fall on my knees?
    Can I hold on to your hand?
    The hand that you cut with on command

    i loved that bit, it was so simple but so striking if you understand me?

    xXx

  • 20 years ago

    by chevybaby

    Your poems are pretty deep,You seem to know exactly how to word things just right,that's a good deal,Ik what its like to be in pain all the time but i can't ever say i under stand what your going through only what you say in ur poems i can under stand a little more bout the pain you feel.I'm not a person to judge i guess i feel that judgement isn't right but pain does things to alot of ppl.I am sorry you go through so much pain that u do that but then again if i were a much stronger person then i am i'd probably do the same but i'm a very weak person.if you'd ever like to chat or anything you can email me chevybaby5769@hotmail.com I've got poems on pain most of them are about guys and all but um...keep writing u are really good at it...plz feel free to email or w.e anytime

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