Wow.. i like it.. but it makes me sad. cause i hvae lost friends too and it does hurt.. i live like 12 hours away from some of my friends and it kills me but we r still friends. but yea. i do like htis poem it has alot of ur emotions in this and it really shows. u did a great job but i think htis is a veyr sad poem for her.. wel keep on writing
take care
luve angie

I think your poem is sad im sorry ur looosing ur friend but dont think ur the only one u seem like a great friend hopefully u can fix ur problems byeee keep writing poems